First Draft

Women Work

                            First of all, both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities. Thousands of women moved from the domestic life to the industrial life. There are two opinions to the issue of women work one of them is agree and the other opinion is disagreeing with women works. In my opinion I encourage the first opinion. We will discuss the reason of the two opinions.

                       Some people are with women work as they gained opportunities to learn new skills, earn income and help husband. Women can also improve their self-confidence and gain respect in their communities by what they do in the society.

                       There are other opinions that disagree with women work for many reasons. First the working woman can neglect her family as she can't take care of her family and her work at the same time. Also there are some women get tired from work as they tired more than men and there are some works difficult for women.

                       Finally, woman is half of our society. She must share with her opinions to make our country more progress. We can't neglect women and say that they have no importance. I am one of the people that want all woman work.