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The Educational System

                    Education is very important in our life. To know if the country is being developed or not, look at its educational system .Our educational system is divided into basic education, which comprises primary stage and preparatory stage, secondary education and post-secondary education.

                   First of all we should know the meaning of education and its importance. Education means growing our mind with new ideas and understandings. It also means an investment in your future, preparing for a career. Some say it is a process of forming young people to fit into our culture and society. The importance of educational system is learning, preparation for wise leadership and personal achievement, and opening your mind to new ideas.

                     Each educational system faces a lot of problems. Problems of education relate to teacher quality and the status of the teaching profession, student academic performance and standardized testing, and equal educational opportunity, and the curriculum in relation to labor force needs. New problems, such as teacher shortages, overcrowded and unsafe schools .The educational systems are key factors in addressing other social problems. More over, there is not enough equipment and facilities like computers and science labs. Another problem is the lack of interest and care that is exhibited from both the students and teachers.

                     In order to solve this problem or to improve our educational system, this system should have co-operation rather than competition. The ministry of education should update the curriculum and make it more attractive and suitable to students and with the field of work. The teachers should use the technology and teaching aids to facilitate the process of learning. It is up to parents to make sure their children understand the value of a good education. Too often parents do not stress the importance of education.

                  Finally, education helps us to make our country more developed. It is the mirror of any society that reflect the cultures of the country. We should make this mirror clean to the other foreign countries.

Outline

The educational System

Q1: What is the meaning of education and what is the               importance of education?

Q2: What are the problems of the educational system? 

Q3: How to solve these problems?

Final Draft

Women Work

                     First of all, both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities. Thousands of women moved from the domestic life to the industrial life. There are two opinions to the issue of women work one of them is agrees and the other opinion is disagrees with women works. In my opinion I encourage the first opinion. We will discuss the reason of the two opinions.

                       Some people are with women work as they gained opportunities to learn new skills, earned income and help husband. Women can also improved their self-confidence and gained respect in their communities by what they do in the society.

                       There are other opinions that disagree with women work for many reasons. First the working woman can neglect her family as she can't take care of her family and her work at the same time. Also there are some women get tired from work as they tired more than men and there are some works difficult for women.

                       Finally, woman is half of our society. She must share with her opinions to make our country more progress. We can't neglect women and say that they have no importance. I am one of the people that want all woman work.