First Draft

Women Work

                            First of all, both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities. Thousands of women moved from the domestic life to the industrial life. There are two opinions to the issue of women work one of them is agree and the other opinion is disagreeing with women works. In my opinion I encourage the first opinion. We will discuss the reason of the two opinions.

                       Some people are with women work as they gained opportunities to learn new skills, earn income and help husband. Women can also improve their self-confidence and gain respect in their communities by what they do in the society.

                       There are other opinions that disagree with women work for many reasons. First the working woman can neglect her family as she can't take care of her family and her work at the same time. Also there are some women get tired from work as they tired more than men and there are some works difficult for women.

                       Finally, woman is half of our society. She must share with her opinions to make our country more progress. We can't neglect women and say that they have no importance. I am one of the people that want all woman work. 

     

First draft

Woman work

Outline:

Introduction:

Body:

**Reason for agree with woman work**

              1- Help her husband to increase family's income

              2- Develop herself and to be more educated

              3- To be more experienced

              4- What she will do in the society

**The counter opinion of woman work**

             1- Neglecting her family

              2- Wasting time

             3- Get tired

             4- Some work difficult for women

Conclusion:

Air pollution " Final Draft "

                      

                       Pollution is considered a serious problem that affects all people all over the world . There are many types of pollution such as : water pollution , sight pollution , and air pollution . We are going to talk about air pollution , its definition , its causes , its effects and its solutions as it is a problem that should be concerned .

                     Air pollution is a harmful change in the natural environment caused by human activities . Every year there are many industrial countries that pollute the air  .

                     There are many causes of air pollution for example , First the growing numbers of car and trucks that create smog causes health problems like cancer and maybe lead to death . Second the effect of the green house . There is another cause of air pollution that is mining operations .

                     Air pollution also has a bad effect on both climate and also people . First on the climate , it changed it to the worst , it make people work more lesser as people have no choice , but they have to breath the air around them regardless of its quality . Second on people it sometimes leads to death . It also has made the hole in the ozone layer and this is a serious problem .

                   The solution of this problem is based on people not only people but also the government . we should limit the number of cars .

                   Finally , this is actually a serious and dangerous problem that every one of us should take into consideration and don’t ignore it . We must take care of our environment much more .

" Essay on pollution "

Air pollution

                      

                       Pollution is considered a serious problem that affect all people all over the world . There are many types of pollution such as : water pollution , sight pollution , and air pollution . We are going to talk about air pollution , it's definition , it's causes , it's effects and it's solution as it is a problem that every one should be concerned .

                     Air pollution is a harmful change in the natural environment caused by human activities . Every year there are many industrial countries being developed and that make air pollution .

                     There are many causes of air pollution for example , the growing numbers of car and trucks these create smog cause health problem like cancer and maybe lead to death . second the effect of the green house . There is another cause of air pollution is mining operation .

                     Air pollution also has a bad effect on both climate and also people . First on the climate , it changed it to the worst , it make people work more less as people have no choice , but they have to breath the air around them regardless of it's quality . Second Second on people it sometimes led to death . It also have made the hole in the ozone layer and this is a serious problem .

                   The solution of this problem is based on people not only people but also the government . we should limit the number of cars .

                   Finally , this is actually a serious and dangerous problem that should every one of us take into consideration and don’t ignore it . We must take care of our environment much more .

                    

First Draft " outline "

Air pollution

Out line

* Introduction

            Brief words about pollution

            Types of pollution

* Air pollution

             Definition of air pollution

* Causes of air pollution

            The growing numbers of car

             The effect of the green house

* Effects of air pollution

            On climate

            On people

* Solutions of air pollution

            The awareness of people

            The awareness of government

        

Welcome Message

Hi my name is Noran Mohamed , I am in 4th year english general deparment in the faculty of education in Suez .