الأحد، 10 أكتوبر 2010

" Essay on pollution "

Air pollution


                      
                       Pollution is considered a serious problem that affect all people all over the world . There are many types of pollution such as : water pollution , sight pollution , and air pollution . We are going to talk about air pollution , it's definition , it's causes , it's effects and it's solution as it is a problem that every one should be concerned .

                     Air pollution is a harmful change in the natural environment caused by human activities . Every year there are many industrial countries being developed and that make air pollution .

                     There are many causes of air pollution for example , the growing numbers of car and trucks these create smog cause health problem like cancer and maybe lead to death . second the effect of the green house . There is another cause of air pollution is mining operation .

                     Air pollution also has a bad effect on both climate and also people . First on the climate , it changed it to the worst , it make people work more less as people have no choice , but they have to breath the air around them regardless of it's quality . Second Second on people it sometimes led to death . It also have made the hole in the ozone layer and this is a serious problem .

                   The solution of this problem is based on people not only people but also the government . we should limit the number of cars .

                   Finally , this is actually a serious and dangerous problem that should every one of us take into consideration and don’t ignore it . We must take care of our environment much more .


                    

هناك تعليقان (2):

  1. The essay is good and the pictures you used are very impressive and related to the topic.
    But I have some comments such as:
    Pollution is considered a serious problem that affect (add "S" to the verb) all people all over the world . There are many types of pollution such as : water pollution , sight pollution , and air pollution . We are going to talk about air pollution , it's (its) definition , it's (its) causes , it's (its) effects and it's (its) solution (s) as it is a problem that (every one) should be concerned .

    Air pollution is a harmful change in the natural environment caused by human activities . Every year there are many industrial countries being developed and that make air pollution (Change this sentence to a more correct one, the structure is not correct).

    There are many causes of air pollution for example , the growing numbers of car and trucks these (that) create smog (which cause (s) health problem(s) like cancer and maybe lead to death . second, ( where is first) the effect of the green house . There is another cause of air pollution (that) is mining operation(s) .

    Air pollution also has a bad effect on both climate and also people . First on the climate , it changed it to the worst , it make people work more less (lesser) as people have no choice , but they have to breath the air around them regardless of it's (its)quality . Second Second on people it sometimes, it led (leads) to death . It also have (has) made the hole in the ozone layer and this is a serious problem .

    The solution of this problem is based on people not only on people but also the government . we should limit the number of cars (try to add more solutions) .

    Finally , this is actually a serious and dangerous problem that should every one of us (should) take into consideration and don’t ignore it . We must take care of our environment much more

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  2. Good work Noran.Your essay has a specific purpose and a clear main idea .Your sentences are direct and they can be understood on the first reading , but you have to concentrate on grammar.Good luck

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